Explanation

Writing My Explanation

I wrote an  Explanation about why people need plants to live. I wrote all the reasons plants are so important and how they help us survive. First, I thought of a good introduction. I thought about how it needed to introduce the topic, and have some information as well, so I decided to start with a rhetorical question. Then I linked my first paragraph with my introduction by using relative information, then I also linked the second one and so on. Here's a link to my blog in the first sentence. 

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